Carpenter's Guild
Carpenter's Guild
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Raymore
Missouri
United States
Ray-Pec High School
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Competition Brief
The District mission is to prepare EACH student for a successful and meaningful life. Our vision is a future-focused community with a commitment to lifelong learning.
About
Our team name is Five Guys, we have been tasked with working with Val McRoberts from the Carpentry's Guild, to spread the word about the new carpentry class coming to the LEAD center next year
Problem
Not enough youth in the carpentry trade
Solution
Spread the word about the trade by providing a information and a class that will take place next year at the LEAD center
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Next Steps
Put up the poster that we created
Reflection | Other Info
We came up with our pitch basically on the spot, we struggled a little with implementing the QR Codes, but other than that we faced no struggles
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7/4/25, 7:46 AM
Thank you for submitting your pitch titled "Test gpt team." It's great to see you taking the initiative to develop your ideas. Here are a few thoughts on your responses:
1. **Test**: It's always a good idea to start with a clear description of your project. Try to provide more detail about your overall concept.
2. **Test Problem**: You've identified a problem, which is a crucial first step. Consider expanding on this to explain why it's significant and who it affects.
3. **Test Solution**: You've proposed a solution, which is fantastic. Think about how you can elaborate on this to demonstrate its effectiveness.
4. **Test Market**: Understanding your market is essential. Try to include more specifics about your target audience and any research you’ve done.
5. **Test Social Impact**: It’s wonderful to see you considering the social impact of your project. Think about how you can articulate this more clearly, perhaps by outlining the benefits.
6. **Test Next Step**: Planning your next steps shows foresight. It would be helpful to include more detailed action items or goals.
7. **Test Reflection**: Reflecting on your work is an important process. Consider sharing more about what you’ve learned or areas for improvement.
8. **Test**: Keep pushing forward with these ideas. Providing more detail and clarity will strengthen your pitch.
Overall, you're on the right track. Keep refining your responses and expanding on these areas with more specific information. Great job, and I’m looking forward to seeing how your pitch develops!

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7/4/25, 7:17 AM
Your pitch sounds great! Keep up the excellent work with 'FocusFlow'!

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7/4/25, 4:59 AM
Great work on your 'Paint Team' pitch! Keep it up!

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7/3/25, 3:32 PM
You did an excellent job with your pitch, well done!

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7/3/25, 1:24 PM
Fantastic work on your pitch, "John James"! Keep up the great effort!

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7/3/25, 1:35 AM
Great work, keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:40 PM
Great work, Evan! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:33 PM
Great work on your pitch, Likith! Keep it up!

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7/2/25, 11:25 PM
Great work on your pitch, Aiden Ford!

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7/2/25, 10:24 PM
Certainly! Here's a rephrased version of the feedback:
"Great job on your video! It's clear that you've put a lot of effort into your pitch. Keep up the good work and continue to refine your ideas. I'm excited to see how you develop your concepts further!"

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7/2/25, 8:27 PM
Great job

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7/2/25, 8:04 PM
Thank you for sharing your pitch, "John James." I appreciate your enthusiasm and passion for dogs, as well as your creative approach to promoting them. Your idea of using videos and social media to highlight the positive aspects of having dogs is a strong strategy, and it's clear you have a good understanding of your target audience.
To enhance your pitch, consider focusing on how you can present a balanced view that celebrates dogs without comparing them negatively to other animals. This approach might help you reach an even wider audience who appreciate all pets. Additionally, think about how you could use storytelling to capture the unique qualities of dogs that have personally impacted your life.
Keep up the great work, and continue sharing your love for dogs with the world!
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